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Less Work and More Leisure Time
Would you like to have less work and more fun time? Most people will say yes. Actually, it would be better for you to have less work load and have more leisure time, because you can either enjoy your casual time at home or go on a short trip,
and you can be ready for another daily work. Although working longer might get good chance of promotion, your free time is no longer enough to join family party. People shouldn’t work too much because they don’t have time to stay with their relationship, and too much work can affect their health.
Family and friends are very important in your life. Maybe you work too hard so you don’t want to share your free time with your family or hang out with your friends. If you have much more of your own time, then maybe your body could be restarted when you have less work. Some parents would like to go picnicking with their children on their weekend. Also, some fathers want to play basketball with their sons, so in this way their relationship will become much stronger. Mothers can share kitchen secrets with their daughters. Family plays a very important role in your life. When you have less work, you can join several family occasions that will be very good experiences in your memory.
If you have too much stress from your work, then your health may not be in good condition. While you have a lighter workload, you may get more pleasure by taking a rest or going on a vacation. It will refresh your feeling to get a happy life. Otherwise, you may be under a lot of stress, and your body will alert you that there might be a bomb inside yourself. Those people around you would be afraid of touching the bomb. So you need to find out the way that can release your stress. Do not make your body explode. For example, students have summer vacation to get relaxed from a lot of homework and exams in the whole semester, and they don’t need to worry about their studying at that time. If stress can be laid down, then you can have good manners to do a lot of things.
Some people say to work harder and longer is necessary for the much more comfortable life. Although to keep working may help you get promoted very fast, you may undergo a lot of pressure. Maybe you will feel unhappy to go to work. If you don’t have a good mood, then you could spend a long time to solve those problems. Daily life is not only work and sleep, but also need free time to relax. Try to have less work and more free time; as a result, you will enjoy those family activities, and your body won’t be sick all the time.
Some people say that having less work and getting more spare time are good ideas. In this way, you can have much happier life. Therefore, it’s not good to be a busy person. Why do you need weekend? Because you may want to take some time to release your stress, and you need some fresh air and you can enjoy the sunshine. Only less work and more leisure time can make it come true. So try to work less and enjoy more fun while you don’t need to work so hard.
寫這種類似正辯和反辯的文章，最重要的是要在第一段把握主題讓讀者知道你是贊成或反對～簡單舉例說明為什麼，你若是贊成那麼第二段和第三段就都是要寫和贊成相關的，第四段就要用反方的說法來協助辯駁說明正方的好處～ＨＯＷＥＶＥＲ之類的詞就可以用在這一段，最後結論的部份記得把前面的主題句再換句話簡單扼要的說明！
既然是五段的文章，開頭最好就能吸引人，第二段和第三段的主旨句也要花點心思然後再加入一些佐證的資料，讓你的論點獲例子可以相輔相佐，第四段試著站在反方的立場，把問題在稍微用另一各角度說明一下，這時候有些連接詞就很好用（although/ nevertheless...），結論的部份再把所有的內容摘要寫出，盡量不要使用一樣的字眼！
把握這些原則應該就可以開始寫這類的作文了！
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Would you like to have less work and more fun time? Most people will say yes. Actually, it would be better for you to have less work load and have more leisure time, because you can either enjoy your casual time at home or go on a short trip,
and you can be ready for another daily work. Although working longer might get good chance of promotion, your free time is no longer enough to join family party. People shouldn’t work too much because they don’t have time to stay with their relationship, and too much work can affect their health.
Family and friends are very important in your life. Maybe you work too hard so you don’t want to share your free time with your family or hang out with your friends. If you have much more of your own time, then maybe your body could be restarted when you have less work. Some parents would like to go picnicking with their children on their weekend. Also, some fathers want to play basketball with their sons, so in this way their relationship will become much stronger. Mothers can share kitchen secrets with their daughters. Family plays a very important role in your life. When you have less work, you can join several family occasions that will be very good experiences in your memory.
If you have too much stress from your work, then your health may not be in good condition. While you have a lighter workload, you may get more pleasure by taking a rest or going on a vacation. It will refresh your feeling to get a happy life. Otherwise, you may be under a lot of stress, and your body will alert you that there might be a bomb inside yourself. Those people around you would be afraid of touching the bomb. So you need to find out the way that can release your stress. Do not make your body explode. For example, students have summer vacation to get relaxed from a lot of homework and exams in the whole semester, and they don’t need to worry about their studying at that time. If stress can be laid down, then you can have good manners to do a lot of things.
Some people say to work harder and longer is necessary for the much more comfortable life. Although to keep working may help you get promoted very fast, you may undergo a lot of pressure. Maybe you will feel unhappy to go to work. If you don’t have a good mood, then you could spend a long time to solve those problems. Daily life is not only work and sleep, but also need free time to relax. Try to have less work and more free time; as a result, you will enjoy those family activities, and your body won’t be sick all the time.
Some people say that having less work and getting more spare time are good ideas. In this way, you can have much happier life. Therefore, it’s not good to be a busy person. Why do you need weekend? Because you may want to take some time to release your stress, and you need some fresh air and you can enjoy the sunshine. Only less work and more leisure time can make it come true. So try to work less and enjoy more fun while you don’t need to work so hard.
寫這種類似正辯和反辯的文章，最重要的是要在第一段把握主題讓讀者知道你是贊成或反對～簡單舉例說明為什麼，你若是贊成那麼第二段和第三段就都是要寫和贊成相關的，第四段就要用反方的說法來協助辯駁說明正方的好處～ＨＯＷＥＶＥＲ之類的詞就可以用在這一段，最後結論的部份記得把前面的主題句再換句話簡單扼要的說明！
既然是五段的文章，開頭最好就能吸引人，第二段和第三段的主旨句也要花點心思然後再加入一些佐證的資料，讓你的論點獲例子可以相輔相佐，第四段試著站在反方的立場，把問題在稍微用另一各角度說明一下，這時候有些連接詞就很好用（although/ nevertheless...），結論的部份再把所有的內容摘要寫出，盡量不要使用一樣的字眼！
把握這些原則應該就可以開始寫這類的作文了！
Useful link:
http://www.slideshare.net/englishbites/useful-argumentative-essay-words-and-phrases
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