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In “World Public Welcome Global Trade- But Not Immigration,” Pew Global Attitudes Project writes, L41 “Those who worry the most about immigration also tend to see the greatest need for protecting traditional ways of life against foreign influences.”
I disagree with this statement because sometimes immigration can bring good ideas to the country, and it might improve something in the city; moreover, it could bring better life to you. In other word, those who think about the worse for immigration also wonder whether the greatest want of keeping traditional ways of life without foreign effects.
因為要將課文中的某一段話拿出來釋義，也就是中文的換句話說，然後還要將你對這段話的想法加入回覆，所以第一個要注意的就是～要避免直接把同義字套入句子中，還要切記務必保留原先句子的意思，上面這短短兩斷花了我將近兩天的時間，還好助教很有耐心的在我提問時回答我的問題，所以最後得到老師給的成績是Ａ，讓我可以不用像其他同學一樣被指導老師要求重寫！
p.s. My TA told me " Maybe use the quote connected to the topic sentence but it is not evidence."
In “World Public Welcome Global Trade- But Not Immigration,” Pew Global Attitudes Project writes, L41 “Those who worry the most about immigration also tend to see the greatest need for protecting traditional ways of life against foreign influences.”
I disagree with this statement because sometimes immigration can bring good ideas to the country, and it might improve something in the city; moreover, it could bring better life to you. In other word, those who think about the worse for immigration also wonder whether the greatest want of keeping traditional ways of life without foreign effects.
因為要將課文中的某一段話拿出來釋義，也就是中文的換句話說，然後還要將你對這段話的想法加入回覆，所以第一個要注意的就是～要避免直接把同義字套入句子中，還要切記務必保留原先句子的意思，上面這短短兩斷花了我將近兩天的時間，還好助教很有耐心的在我提問時回答我的問題，所以最後得到老師給的成績是Ａ，讓我可以不用像其他同學一樣被指導老師要求重寫！
p.s. My TA told me " Maybe use the quote connected to the topic sentence but it is not evidence."
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